Wednesday, September 9, 2015

The Importance of Music

Those of you who know me, know that I love music.

- Rock

- Classical

- Orchestrated Soundtracks

- Musicals

- Video Game OSTs

- Funk

- Folk / Folk Pop

Those are just some of the genres in my collection. I could go on and on, I love music. I have been singing from a young age and have been seen in numerous stage musical productions ranging from "The Music Man" to "The Fanstasticks" (yes, that's how it's spelled). So it should come to no surprise that I listen to music while writing, a lot of music.

Music speaks to us on a level that no other genre can. It speaks directly to the heart and can hold a conversation with us regardless of our native language. Music is the language of the soul.

But, you're not here to talk or read about my thoughts on the soul. You want to read about my writing. So let me attempt to tie my thoughts together. I find that, for me, when trying to create a piece that I'm struggling to get the tone down on, finding the right song can help me get the right words down on the paper. I'm not alone in this either. Brandon Sanderson, while finishing up Robert Jordan's "The Wheel of Time" listened to this song from Final Fantasy X while trying to nail the feeling for the final chapters.

While working on "The Devil from the River", I have drawn a lot of inspiration from some of my favorite Spaghetti and Space Westerns. I have listened to their music on YouTube while taking notes on my characters and world building. I have amassed a good number of songs that I have put into a playlist and have that playlist on repeat while writing my drafts. However, one of those songs has become more than just a mood setter for me. It has become the theme song of the Unforgiven Sins series.

As I listened to the song in a playlist, I realized that the song was far more than just a mood setter for a scene or a chapter. It was, in a short 4 minutes, capturing the feeling I was targeting for the entire series.

I was flabbergasted. I have found songs that had come close to the theme of my book before, but nothing that ever really matched it perfectly, like a child's wooden block fitting into the proper hole.

And now I want to share that song with you.



"Soul of a Man", covered by Steven Stern, is a haunting melody of a man struggling to find meaning in a dark, unforgiving world. Give it a listen and share your thoughts. I hope you enjoy.




Tuesday, September 1, 2015

What's in a Name?

Hi again everyone.

Last week I told you about my need to rework the title. One of the most difficult things for me is coming up with names. For the first year of working on this project, I didn't even have a title for it. I just called it my Steampunk Western Project. No matter what name I tried to call it, they never sat right with me. Then, out of the blue, I came up with the name "The Rise of the Ash Bringer".

At first, I didn't much care for it. It sounded a bit too cliche in my mind. But after about a week or two, I became used to it, so I decided to use it for the title of the first book in the "Unforgiven Sins" series. I was excited to have a name for it, but over time, projects change.

Things in the story had to be removed and planned to be added into other books down the line. After numerous changes, the title that I had worked so hard to discover, didn't work any more. I knew I had to change it. I was disappointed, but a part of me always knew that I had settled what was more of a place holder rather than the actual title of the first book.

This was a crushing set back in my mind. I was already struggling to find time to write now that I had a full time job along with other commitments, now I had to come up with a new title? Part of me just wanted to keep the name the same, but the larger part of me knew I couldn't settle. I had to find the title. The book had changed too much and the focus had become something else entirely, the title just didn't make sense anymore. So, I went to my writing group for help.

My writing group, the Cyber Dragons as we call ourselves, is filled with great minds. We bounce off each other in ways that make us laugh and inspire us to improve our current draft or give us all new ideas entirely. I've have come up with at least 3 ideas for stand alone novels thanks to some of the conversations we've had. If anyone could help me find a title, it was these guys and gals.

After throwing around ideas and themes from Spaghetti Westerns, which "Unforgiven Sins" draws a heavy influence from, I was finally able to settle on the new and final name of the first book. The name sits well with me, and more importantly, it feels like I've found the title that was there all along.

So, without further ado, I am pleased to present to you the reworked cover of "The Devil from the River".


Tuesday, August 25, 2015

Rise of the Ash Bringer Update

Hey all,

Just a quick update for you on the progress of Rise of the Ash Bringer. I am going to be changing the name of the novel. This has come after a lot of personal debate over how much the draft and content of the novel have changed since originally coming up with the title. I will reveal the new title later on after I've gotten with my brother and reworked the cover.

Also, I wanted to let you all know that I will no longer be posting the deadline for my novel. It has just caused too much stress in the past. However, I will be updating you each Wednesday on the progress of my novel.

Thank you for all of your support. Your excitement for this novel is the primary reason I want to do the best job that I can on it.

Tuesday, August 11, 2015

The Joy of Writing or Happy Little Words


Before you read this post, I want you to watch this video. And if you've already watched it, watch it again. Seriously, it's worth your time.

Done? Okay, here we go.

Over the past several months, I have found it a struggle to write and it has been bothering me. I don't know why, but I go through phases where I love to write and I find it a joy to see my thoughts down on paper. Then like a scorned lover, my love of writing departs and I hate everything I type. I want to write. I have sat down to write. But when I have opened up my laptop, I have just sat there and stared at my screen dreading even putting down a single word.

No, I'm not bipolar. I don't lose my love for life or other things, just my desire to write. It has been a difficult thing for me to grasp.

I love stories of all sorts. The medium doesn't matter to me in the least. I've found amazing stories in fictional books, movies, documentaries, live theater, TV shows of all shapes and sizes, video games, radio shows, music, epic poems, listening to other's talk about their lives, and even text books. So it should be no surprise that I've told stories throughout my life on stage, in written form, through role playing games, even playing with my action figures and LEGO sets. I LOVE stories, and yet, that love is not enough to overpower the fear that cripples my ability to see my thoughts come to life on the page.

My one desire is to tell the world my stories and to support my family through those stories, which is why this inability to write that drags on for months at a time terrifies me.

At least, it did terrify me.

You see, until Sunday after having a good conversation with my father, I had no idea what was preventing me from writing. And now, I know what it is, and I know how to fight it. I'll let you know what that fear is later on in the post, but for now, I need to fill you in on what happened to help me see what was keeping my fingers from the keyboard.

Let's go back to the video that I posted above.

On Saturday, I went to a good friend's birthday party. This friend, whose true name I shall avoid but will address her as Irene, loves Bob Ross. Really, who doesn't? Irene said she has always wanted to throw a Bob Ross party, so she and her husband decided Saturday would be the perfect time for it. I decided to attend because why not? It sounded like a lot of fun.

After a great potluck meal, we cleared the table, broke out our modest paint supplies, and watched that video I posted at the top. And you were wondering how I would tie Bob Ross into a post on writing.

Something clicked on in me after I first listened to that song. I hate that phrase because it doesn't do justice to what happened that night, but it's a start. Surrounded by a rainbow of paints, sets of brushes, and a mess of canvases, I felt invigorated. It was all so new and familiar at the same time. The smell of the oil paints filled my nose and took me back to years past when I would sit in my mother's workshop and watch her work and paint along with her with my watercolors. I cannot recall putting oil paints to canvas before Saturday, but it felt like I was coming home when I made the first stroke of white on white.

My Happy Little Painting
After watching and re-watching an episode of "The Joy of Painting", we all walked away with something incredible. My painting didn't turn out like Bob's in the slightest, but I find myself not caring. I had done something new, I had created in a way I have never done before and it was invigorating and therapeutic at the same time. It was like a part of me that had long been sleeping had awoken and was ready to go out and see what else it could do.

On Sunday, I spoke with my father about the experience. About the joy of creating for sake of creating again rather than struggling to find the perfect words. My father, who had a big smile on his face as I spoke to him, told me about how he struggled with perfection in his projects. He is a woodworker, by hobby, and has made some wonderful creations out of simple blocks of wood. He said that he would struggle for weeks worrying about ruining a project by making the wrong cut. Then after weeks he'd say "Oh, what the heck," and go for it.

It was then that I realized what had been holding me back in my own writing. You see, my love of creating hadn't gone anywhere. It was still with me, it had just been overpowered by my own desire to perfect my craft. The fear, my crippling fear that has kept me from working on advancing my writing career, has been perfection. I was demanding perfection of myself because I felt it was needed otherwise my books wouldn't be good enough to put bread on the table. I realized that I couldn't have been more wrong.

No one is perfect. Everyone makes mistakes. And it's OKAY! We make mistakes to learn from them and move on. I was letting my fear of making a mistake hold me back.

And I owe it to Bob Ross and my father for showing that to me.

Bob Ross has a saying, and I may just have to find a way of getting it on my wall. He likes to say, "We don't make mistakes here, we just make happy accidents." With that thought in mind, I cast aside my perfectionist tendencies and wrote on Monday night this week. I wrote for the first time in weeks and, much like at the Bob Ross party, I created out of the joy of creating without the need for it to be perfect.

And it was wonderful.

Friday, March 6, 2015

"The Heart of God" is Live!

Today on Amazon, my very first published piece went live for all the world. This is such an exciting time for me.

I know it doesn't sound like much, but this week the preorders on "The Heart of God" put the book book above 179,000 on the best sold list for the Kindle Store. Yeah, that's a big number, but out of the millions of books available for on Kindle, my short story broke the 200,000 mark. Personally, I think that's huge.

Thanks for your support in this time in my life. More exciting things are on the way, so stay tuned.

Monday, March 2, 2015

The Heart of God

I am pleased to announce my episodic short story series, Tales of Olin, has launched. The first story, "The Heart of God" recounts the origin of Olin and how his actions brought both magic and ruin into the world.

"An ancient order is coming to an and. Their enemies hunt them down one by one. In the hopes of preserving some of their knowledge, one of the last magi tells the story of the first, Olin."

Available now on Amazon.com for preorder.

Also, as hard as it was for me to do, I ended up scrapping a good 2/3's of Rise of the Ashbringer. However, it was for the best. The current draft is much stronger than it was in the past. Stay tuned for updates on that project in the near future.

Friday, April 25, 2014

Rise of the Ash Bringer: Chapter One

Terra hated doing the wash. Not that she had much choice. With momma working at that ranch over in the next valley, it fell to Terra to take care of the little ones and that meant doing the things they couldn’t do, like the wash. While momma was away, Terra did the cooking, cleaning, and fixing up around their home. Even though she was just barely ten, she was also the only one strong enough to carry the wash to the river on the other side of town, so it was up to her to carry it, soap, wash board and all, and wash it, even when it was the middle of fall and the river was ice. Well maybe not ice, but near enough.
She wished to merciful Rain that momma could save enough money to buy one of those new washing boxes that the merchants told her about. But, it was just like momma said, even if they could afford it, they’d still have to pay for a pump to get the water from the river to the house. There was just no way to afford that, not on the meager coin momma made.
She tried not to complain about her workload. She had only been living with momma for a short while, but momma had already done so much for her and Ben. It was weird at first, calling another lady momma, especially one so much younger than her real one was; but it just felt right now. Terra wanted to help her new momma the best she could, even if she had to do things she hated.
The sun peaked over the jagged mountains to the east as Terra walked down the dirt path to the town. Most of the path was covered in leaves, but she could still see the way of it. The bundle of clothing swung on the rope, digging into her arms. Baby Ben strapped to her back cooed in her ear as she walked: the little guy still looked at everything as if it were new and the most interesting thing in the world, even though he’d been on her back for this walk near a hundred times before.
Yeah, you’re right, Ben,” Terra said looking at the forest that surrounded the path, “fall sure is pretty in these parts.”
Sunbeams skipped around the path as they broke through the canopy of branches, teasing Terra into thinking it should still be warm, which it wasn’t. A cool breeze brushed across the leaves of red and gold, then through her tweed cap, chilling the sweat that beaded on her forehead. Thick boots, dusted with age and travel, covered Terra’s feet. The boots were a couple of sizes too big for her, but she needed shoes and momma did the best she could with what little they had. Besides, momma said that Terra would probably grow into them in about a year. Her dress was faded purple decorated with pink flowers. Terra hung a wool shawl over her shoulders and Ben, attempt to keep the chill off the both of them.
Ben was wrapped in a warm, brown blanket and a wool cap covered his head. The chill in the air didn’t seem to bother him any, then again, nothing seemed to bother him, except for when he had gone too long without a nap.
A sudden gust of wind blew down from above the canopy of trees. Terra dropped the wash and held onto her cap so it wouldn’t get blown away, again. Ben screeched in delight. Terra looked up through the leaves and saw the Hawkwood, the local transport zeppelin, buzzing by. She caught the site of a blue pickaxe over a sapphire painted on the side of the giant balloon; the insignia of the William-Davis Corporation, the company that owned the local land and most of the people living on it. The Hawkwood shot off, keeping low to avoid the local military watch posts, no doubt.
She took off the old cap and ran her fingers through her greasy, dusty blonde hair. Putting her cap back on, Terra shook her head, picked the wash back up, and said “One of these days, those crazy pirates are going to hurt someone.” She started walking down the dirt path again.
It wasn’t much longer until she reached the main road that cut through the center of the town. Truth be told though, it wasn’t much of a road. It really wasn’t much more than a dirt path little wider than a wagon, but it was plenty big for Terra. Just down the road she could see the edge of town. It wouldn’t be much longer until she reached the river.
As the edge of town drew near, Terra heard a familiar voice cry out in a mixture of pain and anger. “Ash-ridden, goat drinking piece of rust!”
She turned to the voice and just beyond the edge of the trees, Terra made out the shape of a man working at the base of a sonic post. Round, balding and in need of a shave, Everett Gills crouched next to one of the town’s early warning towers, sucking on his fingers and muttering more words that would earn a slap on the mouth from momma if Terra ever used them.
The post looked more like a pair of rods on a metal box to Terra, but the adults preferred to call them towers. Everett had opened the panel on this particular one, revealing a maze of wires and lights. Terra had no idea how these towers worked, but the tin metal structures kept all sorts of dangerous critters away from the town. Old world tech, she heard one of the adults say once. Nothing at all like the interesting stuff men were making today with gears and steam. With the stuff men were making these days, you could at least get a sense for how they worked just by watching the machine move. But that old world stuff? That was just plain wrong.
Whacha doing Mr. Gills?” Terra asked as she drew close to him.
Everett spun his head to her. He looked like he was about to start another series of curses, but he took a swallow instead. Over a sweat stained shirt and an over-worn pair of brown trousers, Everett wore a leather apron. Various tools decorated the apron: a wrench or two, some screwdrivers, and a couple items of odd design that Terra didn’t know the names of yet. He pulled of a pair of smoked goggles revealing an outline of dirt caking his face. “Don’t sneak up on a man like that, Terra. Never sneak up on a man while he’s working.”
Sorry, Mr. Gills. It’s just you didn’t look like you was working to me. You looked like you was just swearing.” Ben squealed in agreement.
He groaned, and growled at the same time, “None of that, little miss. We get enough of that from your momma. We don’t need two of you.”
Oh, I was just playing with ya. What’s wrong with the sonic fence tower?”
He turned and kicked the base of the tower. “The whole system in this sector seems to be fried. That last storm that came in blew some of the circuitry, and we don’t have anything to replace the ashed pieces with. So I’ve got to make do with what we’ve got, otherwise we’re blind if something decides to meander on our way.
Can I do anything to help?” Terra asked, she started to put the laundry bundle down.
Everett looked over Terra once. “I thought you hated pre-Scar tech.”
Terra looked around, trying to not make eye contact with Everett. “Yes, sir, I do,” she said, shifting in her too-big boot, “But momma told me that if I understand something, then I won’t be scared of it no more.”
Everett paused before responding. “Thanks for the offer, but I’ve got everything under control here,” Everett wiped a soot covered hand across his forehead, smudging his face black.
Terra felt her shoulders fall in relief and hoped that Everett didn’t notice.
You best be on your way,” he turned back to the tower, “But tell you what, I may need your help with some new pieces that are supposed to come in with today’s shipment. And none of this shipment is pre-Scar. Everything coming today should be just what you like to tinker with. Come round my shop before it gets dark and we can have a look at what the Hawkwood brought.”
Terra felt that her smile might split her face in two. “You promise?”
May my soul burn to ash if I’m lying,” he said, his voice echoing as his head was already inside of the tower base.
Oh, but Mr. Gills, I have a lot to do today, other than the washing.” Terra said as her shoulders slumped in disappointment.
Then you best hurry up,” his voice echoed out of the steal box again, “I’m going to need your help to figure out how to get the scrap they sent us in working order.”
Terra nodded, the excitement of working with tools skipping through her mind, as she picked the bundle back up and ran out of the trees and back onto the road into town. She heard more muffled cursing coming from the sonic tower as she left Everett Gills behind.
The smell of dust and oil filled her nose as Terra entered the bustling town. Well, it bustled with as much life as a small mining dorm could. Dozens of wooden buildings scraped along both sides of the street. The buildings that weren’t white washed were painted in various colors. Terra sometimes thought the folk living here thought it a mark of pride to make their house look nothing like the one next to it, but it was more likely that everyone just painted their homes with whatever color Miss Grace had in stock.
The buildings were wedged together like too many chickens in a single stall. A few of the buildings had narrow strips that might be called alleyways, but for the most part, the buildings seemed content to try share walls.
Familiar faces popped out of windows and chatted with people on the road. Mr. James’ saloon was always quite this time of morning, except for those few people who never seemed to leave. Stout Adam Franks stood outside the saloon hammering away at some of the giant copper pipes that fed water to the saloon boilers. Mr. James was one of the few men in town who had enough money to get electric lights without the William-Davis company complaining about the cost. Barber Stevens turned the crank on his razor sharpener, a box of gears and chains so complex that Terra fought the urge daily to take it apart. She almost thought it would be worth the punishment she would get just to see how that machine worked.
Mr. James pulled out a razor and eyed the edge as he sang an upbeat tune. He was told by his customers in no polite words to keep his day job.
Terra passed a white building that resembled a cement block, the only building in the town that stood apart from the rest. The mark of a hospital, a golden crane perched on a dangerous looking branch covered in thorns, dragon vine momma had told her once, had been painted above the door. The gold paint was old and flecked off in many spots, but you could still make out what it was supposed to be. Next to the door, someone had painted in harsh red letters the words Go Away.
A group of boys just older than Terra, the Harris brothers, ran past her with buckets of maple sap to sell at Miss Grace’s store. One of them, Michael, shouted an apology to Terra after one of them nearly knocked her over. His mop of brown, unkempt hair bounced as he ran into the blue building. The doors swung shut past him. Terra stopped herself from thinking about how nice he was and focused on her chore.
This little spot of life was marked on a William-Davis map as Tin Mine Dorm 4, but folks around here just liked to call it River’s Edge. On account of the town being built right next to a river. Terra didn’t think the name was very imaginative, but it was easy to remember.
The town rolled along in buildings of purple, yellow and the occasional blue, until she reached the reached the last building between her and the river: the sheriff’s office. The office was the only building painted green and it looked to have last been painted before Terra was born. On the porch was an old, creaking rocking chair, and on the chair sat Sheriff David Nelson.
David Nelson had a strong jaw and dark yellow hair. The right side of his face was decorated by a nasty scar that matted everything from his ear to his chin. He wore a dark green coat with a silver star and moon on the right breast. A pistol, with a handle worn with age and use, hung in a holster on his hip. He had been appointed sheriff by some pencil-necked William-Davis suit man, and, at first, from what Terra had learned in her short time here, folks didn’t like him much. But he had proven himself capable, and likeable to boot. David Nelson was alright by Terra.
Sheriff Nelson stood as she passed, “Good morning to you, Miss Terra,” he said with a smile.
Good morning, sheriff,” she said, trying to hide her panting. The chill betrayed her as it frosted her breath.
And a very good morning to you, Master Ben,” Sheriff Nelson said, giving a slight bow.
Ben happily cooed back.
Off to do some laundry, I take it?”
Yes sir,” she set the bundle down, “most of the little ones are wearing their spares until I can get this cleaned. Momma is off working hard, so it’s up to me to get their clothes done.”
That’s a good girl, Jessica will be right proud of you.”
She smiled.
Now, how about I lend you a hand?”
Nah, I’ve got it sheriff. You probably got more important things to do; you know sheriffy things and such. Sides, momma says I should do what I can for myself before asking others for help, and I can sure do some smelly wash.”
Sheriff Nelson grinned. “That’s right smart of your momma to say that. But sometimes the point of letting people help you isn’t because you can’t do it by yourself. Sometimes it’s just to let them find joy in helping.”
Is that another one of them verses from that book you’s always reading from?”
The Book of Eleven?” David scratched his scar, “Could be. I don’t read it as often as some folks think I do.”
You should have been a preacher, sheriff, with how much you read from that dusty thing.”
Sheriff Nelson grinned, “Maybe I missed my calling in life.”
Maybe you did. Thanks for the offer, but I can handle it. The river is just over there,” she pointed, “and you’ve more important things to do than stick your hands in a freezing river.”
Can I at least offer to take your wash to the river for you?” He didn’t wait for a response before he walked over and picked up the bundle.
You don’t have to do that, Sheriff Nelson, I can carry it.” She tried to hide the relief in her face. Her arms were already sore and she still had a lot of work to do today.
You’re right, I don’t, but I will.” He walked at a pace that Terra could easily keep up with.
Terra was happy for the extra company. The three of them walked the rest of the short way to the river. The flowing water bubbled over rocks and sparked in the morning sun. The rolling water sang over the riverbed and Terra found an urge to go for a swim. The urged tugged at her, but she knew how cold it was, so she forced the desire down. Trees hugged the banks and fallen leaves of red and gold quilted the ground. Harsh brush and tall grass grew along the shore where rocks were scarce.
Now, let’s see. What is a good place for some laundry,” the sheriff said, setting the bundle down.
Ben started to laugh as Terra untied him. She set him down and put him against a thick oak tree away enough from the river that she didn’t have to worry about him. She said to David “Usually we just do the wash right over there.” She pointed to a small patch of rocks on the river bank. Ben had stopped laughing. He was focused on something just downriver of them.
Terra stood and turned back to the sheriff. “Thanks for the help, Sheriff Nelson. I think I can handle it from here.”
I’m sure you can,” he said. He didn’t look at her though. His eyes were fixed on the other bank.
Everything alright, Sheriff Nelson?” she asked looking in the same direction as David.
Hmm?” his eyes snapped away from the opposite shore, “Oh, yes, everything is fine,” he turned down to her, “Just doing my job and making sure you’re going to be safe.”
I’m always safe here, I do this all the time.”
True, but you can’t be too careful. Come here.” He bent down on one knee and pulled a small book out of his back pocket. The book had a black leather cover and was worn with use; frayed pages fluttered in the breeze.
Ah come, on sheriff. I don’t got time for this,” she said, “Everett promised me that I could help him tinker with some new stuff that’s coming in today if I get all my chores finished.”
This won’t take but a minute,” he said, brushing a finger on the river, “You’ll still have plenty of daylight to tinker away.”
Terra stopped fighting. She learned early that it was best not to argue with the sheriff when he wanted something done. The only person she saw argue her way out of the sheriff’s will was momma. Terra hoped momma would show her how she did it soon.
The sheriff opened up the book and flipped to a page. “There we are,” he said.
With his wet finger, he drew a line across Terra’s forehead and tapped a dot above the line. He then began to read from the book.
Terra didn’t know what he was saying. Not that she didn’t understand the words coming out of his mouth, she just didn’t understand why they were coming out of his mouth. It’s not that she hated Water, and she enjoyed hearing stories about how the Ash Bringer was killed at the end of the Scarring, she just thought that prayer belonged in a church, not here.
He stopped and looked at Terra with expectant eyes. The prayer must have ended.
Water above, Earth below,” she said the words to agree with the prayer, but she didn’t mean them. She tried to avoid his eyes, “Can I get to my washing now? I don’t have all day.”
He snapped the book close and put it back in his pocket. “Yes, you can go.” He began to stand, but his eyes snapped at something behind Terra. He knelt back down, drew his pistol, and pulled Terra behind him faster than Terra could realize what he was doing.
Sheriff, what are…”
Quiet,” he whispered.
Ben started to cry.
Go get Ben, Terra,” David said, never moving his eyes, “and come right back here.”
What’s going on sheriff?” She tried to hide her growing fear, but her voice was already trembling.
Just do as I say,” his whisper was harsh, “Go get Ben and come right back.”
Terra stood there. Fear began to bubble in her chest.
Ben’s crying exploding into the shrieking of a frightened child: unsure of what was happening, but aware enough to know something was wrong.
Go!” His whisper was nearly a yell.
She nodded and ran away from the river to the tree, her legs slipping in and out of her oversized boots. She reached Ben and picked him up, too afraid herself to try anything to calm that stricken child.
Terra turned back to the sheriff, but something on the edge of the river caught her attention. It was hidden in the overgrowth, but she could just see a large gray lump tangled in the green stalks of grass. She moved closer and saw a mass of black strands at one end of the lump. It wasn’t like any stone Terra had ever seen before Ben, still crying, held tight to Terra, his hands clamped on her dress.
Terra!” David cried out. She did not hear him move, but suddenly the sheriff stood between her and the black mass. And as she felt herself move back, she saw a pair of blue eyes under the tangle of black strands looking right back at her.
She screamed.
The sheriff leveled his pistol at the body. He didn’t have the chance to pull the trigger.
Terra screamed as the water around the body exploded, raining river around the area. David grabbed Terra and covered her and Ben with his body. He pushed them away and turned back only to be knocked to the ground by a man dressed in gray, torn clothing.
The man sat on David’s chest. Odd green tattoos covered his right hand, which began to glow with a green light as he drew it back in a fist. A bolt of blue energy slammed into the man’s chest knocking him off the sheriff.
David picked up his pistol and aimed it at the man again. “Thanks for the help, Tom.”
Terra turned and saw Tomantalus walking towards the sheriff, with an odd looking pistol that curved around his knuckle, blue mist waving from the barrel. Tom towered over the sheriff, who was not a short man, by a good two feet, which was not unusually. Terra had seen enough Shidaari to know that they were all taller than humans.
Tomantalus’ yellow-silver skin shimmered in the morning light, like the scales of a fish. His never-blinking compound red eyes gave Terra the shivers every time she looked at them. Unlike other Shidaari Terra had seen, Tom dressed like a local: short cut brown coat and a clean, if well worn, red flannel shirt. He even wore a wide-brimmed brown hat that fit nicely over his not quite human head. Tom turned to David and began to speak. How Shidaari were able to speak without mouths was a thought that constantly nagged Terra.
Apologies… for not coming sooner,” Tom said in a voice that buzzed with each word.
You’re fine,” David said. He walked over to the body and kicked it, “Well, whoever he was, he’s dead now.” He brushed leaves and dirt off of his jacket.
Was I… mistaken to fire when I did?” Tom’s voice buzzed. He paused often as he spoke, as if he was trying to grasp the real meaning of a word before he used it. His pauses reminded Terra of how she looked over her tools from time to time making sure she was picking the right one.
No, not at all,” David said, scratching the scar on his right cheek, “He was aiming to kill me it seems, and that was putting Terra in danger, too. You did good in ending him.”
Tom said nothing. He slipped his curved pistol into an equally odd looking holster and nodded. He walked over to the corpse, his long body dipped with each step. Whenever he walked, Terra couldn’t help but look at his knees, which bent the wrong way. He wore no shoes, which made sense to Terra considering his feet were made up of what looked like four long toes, each as thick as an oak sapling that spread apart from each other with each step, like a tripod, only it had four legs. She never saw a shoe built for feet like that.
Ben had not stopped screaming. Terra tried to wipe the snot from his nose, but Ben kept moving his head.
David turned back to them. “You’d best get home now, Miss Terra. We’ll take care of things here.”
But, Sheriff Nelson…”
No arguing, not now,” David’s voice was calm and his face started to get… quiet, “You get home and see that your siblings are okay. Don’t worry nothing about the wash, some of my boys will take care of it.”
Terra didn’t like the idea of leaving a chore to one of the fat fingered deputies, but she had seen David like this before. The manner in his voice was like the calmness before a storm. In truth she wasn’t sure which one she’d rather face: a Bone Ripper or David when his mood started to get quiet.
She nodded.
Now that’s a good girl,” he turned to Tom, “Get that corpse to the cold box in Norton’s place. I don’t want him stinking up the place before we know if anyone’s looking for him.” David holstered his pistol. “I best get Seph on looking into who this guy is.”
Sheriff…” Tom said, “You may want to… look at this.”
David walked over to him, “What is it Tom?”
This is no… corpse.”
Terra gasped.
What?” David bent down and examined the body.
This man is… still alive.”
Four Hells,” the sheriff cursed, “there ain’t even a scratch on him,” he stood and started back to his office, “This is not something I want to deal with. Tom, put him back in the river.”
David… this man has a… large bounty on him…” Tom said as he rose, his voice buzzing like a hornet’s nest.
David stopped and turned back to Tom, “How large?”
Large.. enough…”
David shook his head, “No, dump him in the river and let Water take him.”
Water… brought him… here…”
Ben’s screaming devolved into sniffing. Terra bounced him in her arms.
David scratched his scar. “Ash Bringer’s beard,” he said.
Terra gasped. She had heard other men curse that badly before, the town doctor seemed to use that curse as often as most men breathed, but never from the sheriff. This must really be bothering him.
David turned to Terra and pointed to the town. “Go on and get Dr. Emerson. Bring him to my office.”
Sheriff,” she began.
Get!”
Ben giggled in her arms as Terra ran as fast as her oversized boots would let her.

Tuesday, November 8, 2011

Word Count Update

The word count on my first draft is a around 28,000 right now. I'm participating in NaNoWriMo and am using it to add 50,000 words to my draft by the end of the month. 8,000 words in the total count have been written this month, so I'm only a little behind. I'll be writing more tonight.

If you're participating in NaNoWriMo as well, feel free to add me. My user name is Kurogawa.

Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Finally, a Title.

A title came to me tonight as I was writing. It's funny how things I try desperately to think of just come to me when I'm trying to do something else. Anyway, here's the title.

The Mark of Horouh: Book One of the Dragon Wolf War

I put another 1200 words down tonight as well. Not as much as I hoped to do, but not a bad number either. I will work on it more tomorrow. I'd like to finish this chapter by the end of the week.

Tuesday, July 12, 2011

It's Good to be Writing Again

I just wrote 1000 words tonight of actual writing, not outline. It felt great to get back in the seat and write. I have a lot of ideas that I really want to put to page with this novel and I think I can do it. I should be able to write more in the coming days.

Monday, February 7, 2011

Major Changes on the Way

I had a major brainstorm this last week for the plot to my book. I'm really excited about it, but I'm not going to share it here because of spoilers. This new idea just really clicked with me and I'm happy to say that I won't have to change much to the story to make it work. Here's looking forward to writing more this week.

Saturday, January 29, 2011

Another 1800 = Word Count at 4%

I added another 1800 words to my manuscript this week. I've been working on the outline, but that doesn't count as real writing in my book. The chapter isn't done yet, but I won't have anytime to work on it anymore before it's due tonight for my writing group, The Bartlebys. I'm going to finish the chapter with another 1000 words or so on Monday and then move on to the chapter 3.

Saturday, January 15, 2011

Word Count at 2%

As of the time of this posting, I currently have 2561 words written which is roughly 2% of my goal. I would have had more, but I threw away a thousand words because it ended up being trying to do too much in too short of a space with it. No need for exposition dump.

I joined a writing group recently, and we have a goal of writing 3k to 5k words a week. This week, including the notes I took and the stuff I threw out, I wrote a little more than 4k words, but the only words that really matter are the ones that end up in the novel.

Wednesday, January 5, 2011

Starting Up Again

I took a long break from writing on my novel because of the craziness I put myself through with school, assistant directing and acting in a musical, working on Warp and Weave, and graduating. I don't recommend that to anyone.

However, I am back and am working on my titleless fantasy novel. My goal is to reach 100,000 words with this novel and right now I have a little more than 600.

Tuesday, July 27, 2010

My life for Aiur!

My inspiration to complete my manuscript came in the mail today. I am going to put it in a place that I will see everyday, but not allow myself to open it before I finish my manuscript.

Speaking of the manuscript, the outline is still coming along at a good pace. After I take my brainstorming walk tonight, I hope to add another 1000 words to it.

Wednesday, July 21, 2010

Outline

I've been working on the outline for my manuscript and so far I've got a little more than 1200 words (about 6 pages double spaced) on it. I don't know how long the outline is going to be, but I want to get as detailed as I can with it before I begin writing the manuscript. I am a bit worried that I have too many ideas for this and so it might feel like I've crammed too much in it, but considering this is my first full manuscript as opposed to a short story, it is going to be more of a learning experience than anything else.

When I get down to actually writing it I'll try to keep daily updates with how many words I've written.

Thursday, July 8, 2010

Photo for 365 Days of Manga

Hey guys. I'm a member of suvudu.com and recently won some manga in the 365 Days of Manga contest. This is me with the manga.

Thursday, April 29, 2010

Hunt by the Blood Moon

This is the final project for my Advanced Fiction class for this semester. Leave any feedback that you have in the comments below.

Lightning assaulted the night, igniting the gray pallet of rain clouds. Before the Hunter lay the infested forest; blackened by the twisted energies of the Beast within. The gnarled tops of the trees reminded him of gnarled hands clawing at the sky when bolts crashed above them.


He ran his fingers through his short, brown hair before he put his tattered, straw fedora on his head. Tightening his grip on the worn scabbard of his katana, Ren entered the blackened forest. The crimson light of the moon would soon bleed over the mountains; he had to make this quick. His light brown jacket and faded, blue denim pants shielded his scarred body from the drizzling rain, but it would not be long before the rain sleeping inside the clouds would awaken. The rain did not bother him; to Ren, the rain was a guardian. What did bother him was the thought that his prey would escape and he would never see his daughter alive again.


This is a bad idea.


Not now.


You know I'm right. You'll walking to your own death.


I didn't ask for your opinion.


Well, you're going to get it. This is suicide! And for what? A girl that might be your daughter?


I'm not going to argue with a voice in my head.


You barely even know her! Besides, Suzume died fifteen years ago and Noah can't be any older

than ten. I'll admit that she looks a great deal like your mate, but there’s no possible way for Noah to be related to you.


Ren stopped. Memories of Suzume flooded into his head. Her soft raven hair was silk in his fingers, the love in her deep, sapphire eyes strengthened his desire to protect her, and her strong body, hardened after years of Hunting, was pressed into him, arms wrapped in an embrace. Ren pushed the images of her away before he saw her corpse, twisted and bloodied. Until he met Noah in a settlement half a days journey from this forest, Ren thought that their daughter had died with Suzume that night. The voice in his head was right, Noah was too young to be his daughter, but the Fenrir who attacked the settlement earlier today had not killed her. That alone meant that Noah was more than human.


Ren, listen to me. In all the years I've been in your head, I have only disagreed with you when you are being an idiot. Your father had a hundred years more experience when he fought a Fenrir in the moonlight and that didn't stop him from being slaughtered. You're going to get us killed. There’s no way the Beast hasn’t already done the deed.


No, she's alive.


Ren –


No, it took her for a reason. It wants to Feast on her energy and the only time it can do that is when the full blood moon is in the sky, which won't be for a few more hours. If I don't kill the Beast tonight, then it will grow stronger from the Feasting. It has to be tonight, you know it just as well as I do.


The voice was silent, but Ren could feel his frustration through the bond that they shared, a bond that Ren never understood, but knew he had with the voice.


Ren, listen to me. I know that Fenrir's are nearly impossible to find during the day, but they can be found.


He knows I'm here. If he knows someone is looking for him, then he won't be found.


I can't talk you out of this can I. A sigh passed through Ren's mind. Alright, if you're going to get us killed then I might as well try to keep us alive.


Just keep an eye open for the Fenrir.


I don't know how useful that'd be. I use your eyes to see.


Then shut up and just let me know if you notice something that I miss; I can't focus with you chatting away like this.


Alright, but you know better than going into Infested Forest at night. The moon gives them strength. That's why they tried to blot out the sun. And with that, the voice was silent. From the day that Ren awoke as a Hunter over a hundred years ago, the voice had been a part of his life. He would have been dead many times over without the advantage of having a second mind using his eyes. At different times Ren had tried to name the voice, but it always rejected Ren's attempts, so he simply called it Voice.


Ren closed his eyes and opened his mind to the world which cannot be seen by humans. His eyelids shot open and his white pupils expanded until they coverd his irises and he saw the streams of life – ghost like waves of light dancing in the night air. The crimson aura of the blood moon began to bleed over the distant mountains and through the shadowy clouds. In the day the forest was nothing more than a thick grove of withered and dieing trees, but at night it burst with life as the moonlight seeped through the coal-like, blackened husks. Ren's eyes scanned the moonlit forest, seeking his prey. The waves swirled around him and began to cluster to the north. There. Cautiously, Ren entered the woods and the trees welcomed him with a thousand black, needle-thin fingers stretched towards the ruby-black sky.


His ears picked up the sounds of numberless Lesser Beasts. They mocked him as he dared to enter their home at night. They would not bother him, most Lesser Beasts were cowards and wanted nothing to do with humans, let alone Hunters. They rarely ever left the safety of their lands, Lesser Beasts had strength only in numbers and were more vulnerable to man's weapons. Greater Beasts, however, could only be harmed by a weapon that has the energy of a Hunter channeled into it. Entire settlements had been wiped out by a single Greater Beast.


The wet ground cushioned Ren's steps as he crept through the tainted forest. The rain broke free of the sky's grip and a torrent of water crashed against the land. Fortunately, streams of life are not affected by the weather. Being a Hunter had advantages, heightened senses being one of them. This meant that he could hear and see every droplet of water hit the ground, but that also meant that he could feel every ounce of rain that landed on him. He had learned to tune out the weather when he could, but while on the Hunt, he could not afford to. Ignoring anything his senses told him could lead to his death, and right now, his senses told him to duck.


The streams of life shifted and the pattern of rain fall changed behind him. Something was approaching. Ren hit the ground, a tackle inches above him. It was gone again before he had regained his footing, but the streams of life now rippled in the Beast's wake. There's our boy!


The Hunt was on.


I know, Ren thought, now make yourself useful and help me keep track of him. Voice could be helpful at times. Having two minds using the same pair of eyes was an advantage when running through a blackened forest – one mind kept track of the prey and the other focused on the surroundings. It made running through muddy terrain almost safe.


Grab that next trunk. Instinctively dropping his duffel bag, Ren did as Voice told him. His grappled onto the withered tree. The rain slicked trunk would have been impossible for a human to hold on to, but Ren's powerful grip drove his fingers into the bark. Some of the roots broke out of the muddy soil, but the tree held strong. The sudden stop jolted him and it took a few moments for Ren to regain his bearings. A few feet in front of him was an edge that lead to a very steep drop. Ren doubted that even he could survive the fall.


Thanks.


Ren pulled himself towards the tree and saw his bag a few yards away. The shock of stopping pulled him out of his trance like state. Catching his breath, Ren once again opened himself to the darker things of the world. His pupils expanded and the streams of life danced again before him. Before he could move to pick up the bag a deep voice spoke to him from behind.


“You are brave to enter into my forest, human. Or are you foolish?”


Ren didn't bother to answer; one wrong move and he was dead. The streams of life began to ripple, teaching him the location of the Beast: ten paces behind him. If the streams were this effective at long distances, then the Fenrir would not have taken him by surprise.


“Turn around, I want to see the face of the impudent imp that trespasses in my domain.” Ren did as he was told. Ten paces away the Fenrir sat on a stone twice the height of Ren. The Fenrir's silver fur gleamed in the red moonlight. The demon dog examined Ren with emerald-green eyes. A frightening strength slept inside its massive, canine body. Ren could be torn in half before he could so much as blink. He was glad that Fenrirs enjoyed playing with their food before eating. “You have the eyes of a Hunter,” the Beast's ears perked up. “You are smaller then the last rodent, imp.”


Ren did not respond.


“Can it talk, I wonder? Maybe this one is too frightened to speak,” the Beast sniffed the air, “No, it is not fear I smell, it is anger. You are angry at me?”


“At you and all of your damn kind.”


At this, the Fenrir threw his head back and laughed, it was a crackled and grainy laugh. “Oh, I remember you now. You were there this morning when I took that sleeping Huntress. Did you come to find her? I'm afraid that you're too late. Her energy was delicious.”


Ren's hand rushed to the hilt of his katana. No, don't let it provoke you. You have to calm down. Voice was right, if he made any stupid moves here, then it would all be over. But he began to slowly channel his energy into his weapon – any faster and the Beast would notice it.


“Oh? A reaction? An imp came to save an impling? How very brave of you. You humans will never cease to entertain me.


“We will when you're dead.”


“When I'm dead?” another laugh bellowed from the Beast. “Do you think that I've only killed one Hunter before tonight?”


“No, but I'm the last one you'll live to see.”


“Fool!”, the Beast was visibly angered, “Now you shall see why you must never hunt a Beast in the the full light of the blood moon. Draw your weapon imp, I would hate for this to be over to quickly.”


Ren's attack was not ready, but he did not want the Fenrir to know that. Without the proper amount of energy, his steel blade would be useless against the dangerous energies that gave life to Greater Beasts. As useful as channeling was for Hunters, it was not without limits. The energy did not last long once it left his body. Even if he knew where the Beast was before he entered the forest, his attack would have been useless had he prepared it too soon. He held onto the scabbard with a firm grip and tightened his hand around the hilt.


The Fenrir stood and began to draw strength from the moon. The silver hairs of its fur stiffened, forming thousands of razor sharp needles. The cavernous mouth of white fans twisted and the saliva turned a deep, venomous green. Razor like claws cut out of its paws. The emerald green eyes melted to a crimson red. A blood churning howl that would send lesser men running vibrated through the forest. Seconds passed and the Fenrir became a demon.


Before Ren could react, the Beast launched through the are – the power of its legs left a crack in the stone it had been perched upon. Ren rolled to the side just as the Fenrir's deadly claws sliced the surrounding trees. Ren quickly regained his footing as the Beast landed, but its form faded into the night air.


The Beast's laughter echoed through the forest, but Ren could not see it. Where is it!


If you can't see it Ren, neither can I.


He only heard it when it paused to jump. In any other situation he could use the streams of life to pinpoint the Beasts location and predict its next move, but this was a Fenrir and Ren had made the mistake of allowing it to change forms – not that he could have done much about it.


This is a tricky one; too bad your sword wasn't ready yet.


It's hard enough already to channel without running.


A surge of air announced another attack from Ren's left. He quickly grabbed the hilt of his katana and used the curve of the sheathed weapon to redirected the Beast into a nearby stone. The Fenrir slammed into the rock, but was unhurt by it; the grin on its face sent chills through Ren's body.


I think he's enjoying this!


That makes one of us. The face of the Fenrir melted through the shadows directly in front of Ren. If not for his trained reflexes shoving his scabbard in the the Beast's path, Ren would be dead. Instead, he was knocked to the ground with the venomous fangs, dripping with poison, only inches away from his face. The only thing between him and death was the cracking wooden scabbard that he pressed against the Fenrir's throat. Ren's strong body was only just able to keep the Fenrir from snaping his head off. The bright, green, poisonous mucus hanging from the Fenrir's mouth dribbled onto the ground, the sound of stone searing shot past Ren's ear.


“You are strong, imp. I shall enjoy eating you.”


“You'll have to kill me first.” Ren put what strength he could into his legs and kicked the Fenrir off of him. He scrambled to his feet and turned to face it, but once again it was gone by the time he was ready.


That's a nice little trick, isn't it?


Too bad you can't teach me that one.


Oh, it's easy. You just need a few million pieces of metallic, silver fur that bounce the light off of you.


The Beast came from the side, its needle like fur scraping against Ren's hand as he dove to avoid it.


You're not helping.


The streams of life bent before Ren's eyes: the Fenrir was coming from behind. Ren did not have time to get up so he pushed himself and rolled to the side moments before the Beast landed. The explosion of dead leaves, fallen branches, and mud clouded Ren's sight for only a moment, but it was long enough to nearly kill him; if it had not been for a sturdy tree, the slick mud would have thrown him off a cliff. He caught a quick glance at the Beast just before it faded away again. The Fenrir's eyes gave away its enjoyment.


It really is enjoying this!


Focus, Ren. Keep your head in the fight.


Ren pulled himself up. When I'm done channeling this will be over in one attack.


Then we just have to find a way to distract it so you can have time to channel.


Oh, is that all.


The streams bent once again above him and Ren leapt to the side, but not before the needles of the Beast's fur cut his face. This time it did not flee to the shadows, but instead the Fenrir stood its ground and rammed Ren in the chest with its powerful hind legs. A normal human would have been snapped in half by the sheer force of the kick, but it had been a long time since Ren was a normal human and his body was hardened by the strange internal energy that gave Hunters their strength. Even with his hardened body, the Beast's claws pierced Ren's skin and blood began to trickle down his shirt muddy, faded green shirt. Ren shot through the air and slammed into a tree. He grunted with pain and struggled to get back up.


Watch it!


Voice's warning almost came too late. The Fenrir slammed Ren down, pinning him to the ground as its claws dug into his flesh. His left hand caught the Beast's throat and held it at bay. Ren's blood coursed down his arm as the sharp fur pierced his hand. He could not strangle the creature, nor could he crush its throat – Ren's hands did not hold the strength to bend steel. His right hand searched for his katana, but his eyes found it close to where the Beast had kicked him.


“You put up a decent fight for an imp, but you should have known it was a mistake to come into my home at night.”


The fangs were only inches away from Ren's face. He desperately pushed, fighting for his life, fighting for the chance to save Noah, but his strength was leaving him. He looked around, desperately searching for anything that would help him save his daughter. He could channel his energy into his hand, but it wouldn't do much against the natural armor of the Fenrir. He moved his head to the side, narrowly avoiding a slimy drop of poison.


His eyes darted to every angle his head could allow, struggling, searching, trying to find something that would get him out of this situation. His free hand slapped around in the mud, reaching, trying to find anything that could be used as a weapon. His fingers found a stone just big enough to hold. The stone was weak; it wouldn't hold a charge for long, but it would have to do. He picked up the rock and began to channel his body's energy into his arm. If his timing was off in the slightest then he was dead. It was all on this one shot. Well, who wants to live forever? Voice wasn't very reassuring.


“The mistake, demon, was you underestimating me.”


The Fenrir laughed. “You must have landed on your head, I'm the one who's about to kill you.”


“Really? Care to make a wager?” Ren let go of the throat and the Beast lunged forward. He pulled his head to the side, avoiding the dangerous fangs, and quickly shifted the energy from his arm into the rock. The rock cracked under the pressure of the channeling, but Ren was fast enough to slam it into the Fenrir's head before it broke. Thousands of tiny little shards of energy shotgunned into the demon dog's head; it wasn't enough to kill the Beast, but it would stun it. The Fenrir howled in pain as Ren’s attack forced the moonlight out of its body. “You lose.” Ren picked himself up and walked over to grab his katana.


Don't you think it would be wise to tend to your wounds? It's not going anywhere anytime soon. If it wasn't for the moon that much energy would have killed it.


I'm not going to risk it getting back up. I'm going to finish this, now. He bent over to pick up his blade and turned to see the Fenrir still writhing in agony. Voice was right, it wasn't going anywhere anytime soon.


I told you to tend your wounds. You won't survive a Slaying with that many cuts. And who would take care of Noah if you don't?


Alright! He grabbed a nearby tree and braced himself. He closed his eyes and channeled his body's energy. His body began to vibrate; a smoke started to drift from the tree that his hand held. Ren lungs would not release any air – it hurt too much to breath. An agonizing gasp burst from his mouth as the channeling came to an end. The black tree showed no sign of damage, other than the charred smoke that now crept from its flesh. If it had not been for the smoke, no one would have known that the tree had nearly caught fire.


Ren caught himself before hitting the ground. He turned himself to rest his back on the trunk and caught his breath.


Oh, it wasn't that bad? At least you stopped the bleeding.


I'd like to… to see… you… cauterize your own… wounds… without it… hurting like hell. After some of his strength returned, Ren grabbed his katana and walked over to the Fenrir. Its form had reverted to the daytime shape and was now panting heavily on the ground. The rain stopped as Ren moved in for the kill.


“Well done… imp. I did… not expect to… be bested by the likes of you…”


Ren channeled his energy into his hand and then transferred it into the sword. The katana began to vibrate inside its scabbard and a piercing scream cut through the night air.


“How many of my kind… have you killed?” It was gasping for air still, but Ren could see that the Fenrir was recovering.


“How many humans have you?” Ren was trying to stall for a little more time. His attack was almost ready, he could feel the vibrations reaching their peak.


“I cannot tell. Do you remember how many ants you've crushed?” It let out a bellowing laugh at this remark.


“Yes, I do. I'm about to add another one to the list.” His attack was ready, but so was the Fenrir. In one final desperate attempt, the Beast pushed itself at Ren, jaws open for a kill. The streams of life bent and Ren pushed his legs into the ground; bracing for the attack. He drew his katana from the scabbard, an arc of blue and white energy burst through the red light of the black forest and the blade cut through the Fenrir's jaw and into its body. In one swift strike the fight was over. Ren caught a glimpse of the Fenrir's green eyes: it knew its end had arrived. In the moments that followed the attack the body of the Beast began to change. The brightness of the silver fur dulled, the shimmering red eyes faded, its life was at an end.


Here it comes.


Ren braced himself as a purple ball of light the formed above the Beast's lifeless husk; the ball of energy would replenish what Ren had spent in the fight and add five more years to his life. A quiet stillness fell over the forest. The light darted at Ren and pierced his chest and he was knocked over by its force. He convulsed in pain on the ground; his fingers, arms, knees, all of his limbs began to bend against his will. He screamed in pain and white light burst out of him in all directions. After a few moments of agonizing pain, it was over. The Feasting marked the end of the Hunt the forest had been cleansed. Only one thing remained for Ren to do.


“Noah!” was that only thing that Ren said before his body collapsed. He could barely hear Voice calling out for Noah as everything turned black.


* * * * *


The gentle, gray morning sun broke past Ren's closed eyes – he had slept the entire night. He opened his eyes and was greeted by a pair of sapphires set in a human face looking at him – the same sapphires as Suzume.


“Morning sleepy head.” A giggly voice spoke to Ren. As he became more aware of his surroundings, he realized that his head was being cradled in a small lap. His white pupils adjusted and he realized that the sapphire eyes also had white pupils.


“Noah?”


The little girl nodded. “You had us worried for a little while there. You were really out of it, but he said you always pull through, even if you do give him a scare sometimes.”


“Wha? Noah,” Ren sat up and saw that no one else was there, “who are you talking about?”


“You know, him. The voice in your head.”


“Wait,” surprise gave Ren a rush of adrenaline. Only one other person had ever been able to hear Voice, “you can hear him, too?”


“Of course I can. He's the one that told me how to find you. Why are you smiling so big?”


“The only other person who ever heard him was my father.”


“Oh?”


“Yeah.”


Ren could tell that Noah was puzzling this out in her head.


“Then... does that mean we're related?”


“Yes, Noah, I think it does.” Ren could not hold back the tears any longer, the tears that he could not cry since the day Suzume and Noah were stolen from him.